Here in the Real World

“That’s her grandson. Off in his own world.”

This quote by Mrs. Sauer, Big Deal's neighbor, immediately establishes Ware’s isolation and difference through the phrasing “off in his own world,” suggesting both a protective distance and a disconnection from others. The tone is external and observational, demonstrating how Ware is perceived by people around him. The simplicity of the statement demonstrates how Ware’s solitude is simplified and judged by those who don’t understand him. It is one of many instances of Ware being told that his desire for solitude is wrong.

“He gripped the limb above his head and swung himself up. Belly to the broad limb, he stretched his arms, his legs. Branching. He imagined sap rushing through his veins, fresh leaves unfurling from his fingers and toes.”

This quote uses vivid natural imagery and metaphor to connect Ware physically to the tree as though he is not just in nature but part of it. The metaphor suggests growth, renewal, and the idea of Ware wanting to transform himself, hinting toward the theme of Renewal and Rebirth. It also showcases Ware’s imaginative mind and how he uses fantasy to understand his reality.

“In her mirrored glasses, Ware saw himself reflected. Looking back was the most pathetic kid in the world.”

Throughout the story, Jolene's sunglasses reflect Ware's image back to him. In this moment, they symbolize his internalized shame and self-judgment. The adjective “pathetic” reveals Ware’s low self-esteem and brings about a harsh reality that others see him as not fulfilling his purpose.