Old Man's War

John Scalzi

55 pages 1-hour read

John Scalzi

Old Man's War

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2005

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Part 3, Chapters 16-18Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Content Warning: This section of the guide includes discussion of graphic violence, cursing, and death.

Part 3, Chapter 16 Summary

John meets with a Consu ambassador in an arena that was specifically designed for their assembly. Because the Consu believe themselves far superior to other races, they will destroy the arena after use and then send it into the nearest black hole to ensure the destruction of its atoms. The ambassador has a criminal record, the idea being that it is dishonorable to speak a human tongue.


The ambassador agrees to allow the humans to fight for the right to ask five questions. The humans win the first three fights, though they lose limbs and are severely injured in doing so. In the fourth fight, Sergeant Hawking loses and is decapitated by the Consu soldier. In the final one, Jane wins, throwing her knife into the Consu’s skull. In the end, John asks four questions, which is more than the CDF expected.


John asks if the Consu gave the Rraey the technology to track skipping, and the Consu representative admits that they did. He then asks how many tracking units the Rraey have and learns they only have one. For the third question, John asks how many other species that the humans are aware of have tracking devices; the Consu tells him that there are no others. Because the CDF only prepared for two or three questions, John decides to use his fourth one to ask why the Consu don’t just destroy all other races. The Consu tells him that they “love” them. Reflexively, John asks for clarification and is shocked when the Consu continues. He tells John that they want the other races to learn, grow, and advance themselves so that eventually they become worthy of the Consu. Their hope is that, someday, other races can be reincarnated into “perfection.” They gave the tracking unit to the Rraey to help them advance in this way.


After the meeting, John debriefs with the other commanders. Crick explains that the next step is to go back to Coral. The first ship will intentionally skip above the planet, where they will be shot down. However, they plan to be close enough to the atmosphere that they can survive the fall to the planet and then launch a ground attack against the Rraey to capture—but not destroy—the tracking unit. This will allow the rest of the CDF ships to attack.


Crick tells John that he will be sent back to Phoenix. However, John asks to go with them, pointing out that they need to replace Hawking. Crick is initially hesitant but leaves the decision up to Jane. She agrees to let John fight in her unit, so Crick welcomes John as the first “realborn” ever in the special forces.


After the meeting, Jane comes to John’s room. She yells at him for volunteering and risking his life, getting into his face as she does so. She tells him that he doesn’t understand what it’s like to be special forces. They are both genetically modified, but she has no history or memory, despite desperately wanting one. She admits to John that he is the first thing that has given her a sense of who she really is, and she desperately wants him to stay alive so that she doesn’t lose it. She puts her hands on John’s face as she finishes, and John takes Jane’s hand. He tells her that he can’t sit by while she fights. He implores her to teach him everything she knows before the battle so that he can survive. He then kisses her hand.

Part 3, Chapter 17 Summary

The special forces’ plan to land on Coral and attack the Rraey works flawlessly. They use nanobots to protect themselves from the heat of the atmosphere and to form parachutes. On the way down, they target the Rraey command center, where the tracking unit is being held. In just under 90 minutes, they manage to kill all the Rraey, take over the command center, and establish a central base for their soldiers. However, Jane warns John that this was only the first step, and they begin to prepare for a counterattack.


John thinks back to the night before. Jane asked him if he wanted to go back to being “normal” after living in a modified body. He told her that he does and that he plans to as soon as his service is over. He then asked Jane the same question; however, she admitted that special forces rarely retire, as they know nothing about what it’s like to be human. John pointed out that she could live her life in reverse order—service and then civilian existence—but still get the comfort and happiness she imagines. However, she responded that she would feel lost, as fighting is all she has ever known. At the end of their conversation, John told her that after retiring, he will send her a “postcard” to let her know where he is so that she can join him. She laughed it off, but John was being serious.


The Rraey attack quickly and relentlessly. They have no battle plan, so the special forces are able to fend them off for a while, but the Rraey’s sheer numbers swamp the CDF soldiers. While Jane and John shoot at approaching Rraey soldiers, their position is hit by a rocket. A rock strikes Jane’s head, severely injuring her. After fighting off the approaching Rraey, John grabs her and runs over 100 meters to a nearby repair garage. He checks Jane over and learns that she is still alive and no longer bleeding; however, she is in desperate need of medical help. His BrainPal informs him that there is an infirmary inside the command tower that has a stasis chamber that will help her heal and keep her alive until they can get her off Coral.


John carries Jane back to the control center. As he goes inside, he sees the first CDF ships arriving in the atmosphere. He also realizes that the Rraey are doing everything they can to destroy the command center and the tracking device. As parts of the building are destroyed around him, John makes it to the infirmary. He finds the tracking unit there, along with several dead Rraey soldiers. He searches and finds the chamber. Just before leaving, he sees a memory module on one of the dead Rraey soldiers. He plugs it into a monitor and sees all the data and schematics on the tracking unit. He takes the module and leaves just as the building is destroyed.


Outside, John sees all the Rraey fleeing as even more CDF ships arrive and begin to attack. Crick sees him and thanks him for saving Jane’s life, promising to get her on the next transport. John then gives him the memory module.

Part 3, Chapter 18 Summary

Because of his work on Coral, John is promoted to captain. He spends the first few months going to different planets to try to recruit new CDF soldiers. He is treated as a hero and largely performs public relations for the CDF. After that, he works with new recruits, introducing them to their new bodies and warning them about the dangers of war, just as Higgee did for John and his friends. Finally, John asks to return to combat, realizing that it is what he wants to do.


In all this time, John never sees Jane, though he learns that she healed fully and was reassigned to a new special forces ship. John also hears from Harry, who has begun working on the data from the skip drive tracker. He admits that the technology is well beyond what humans can replicate and that it opens up entirely new fields of mathematics and physics.


One day, John returns to his room and has a message from an anonymous sender. It is a picture of a field and farmhouse. He then hears Jane’s voice; she has decided that she wants to retire one day, and she wants John to join her. She tells him that she may be different from the woman who once occupied her body but that John once loved “part” of her. She has realized that “part of [her] wants to be loved by [him] again” (351). John thinks back to his last day on Earth, when he visited his wife’s grave and left without regret. Now, he is confident that he can leave his military life someday as well—also without regret—because he will see Jane again.

Part 3, Chapters 16-18 Analysis

The brutality of war and The Duality of Technological Advancement are on full display in the novel’s climax, when the Ghost Brigade and the Rraey soldiers brutally battle each other, killing thousands. Technology allows the Ghost Brigade to land on Coral, as they utilize advanced nanobot technology to free-fall from space. Technology also allows the brigade to attack the Rraey, systematically killing dozens of soldiers around the command center. However, the Rraey attack with equal brutality, emphasizing the killing power of the technology that other species have developed. That the battle centers around the technology of the skip drive, which will allow humans to more efficiently colonize the universe, raises further questions about The Ethics of War.


John’s decision to help Jane and ignore the battle that rages around him reflects his character development. For much of the novel, he has simply followed orders, ignoring his internal conflict about the loss of his humanity. However, he begins to change when he meets Jane, getting to know her on a personal level and connecting with her. In the novel’s climax, he prioritizes that connection over the mission’s objective. The fact that he finds the skip drive tracker mostly by accident emphasizes the shift that has occurred. While focusing on Jane’s life, he also manages to win the battle for the CDF—but only as a secondary thought and action.


After the battle, the tone of the novel becomes nostalgic. John briefly covers several months of his life, explaining that he left combat and began working in higher-up roles within the CDF but remained sad about not seeing Jane. However, the tone shifts in the final pages, as John finally receives a message from Jane. While it may be years until they can be together, the final lines give hope for their relationship. The brutality of the war still dominates their lives in the present, but there is potential for them to be together in the future. Ultimately, the novel ends where it began, with John remembering his wife and her grave, but this circular structure paradoxically emphasizes how far John’s character arc has taken him: Just as the opening lines of the novel marked a new beginning for John, the closing lines emphasize a future beyond the military.


The encounter with the Consu in the final part of the text emphasizes their similarity to humans, further developing the theme of Colonization and the Conflict Between Self and Other. For much of the novel, the CU assumes that the Consu are fighting simply for sport, finding joy in colonization rather than having any specific end goal. However, as John asks his questions of the Consu soldier, the latter explains, “We tend to you, to all you lesser races, consecrating your planets so that all who dwell there may be reborn into the cycle. We sense our duty to participate in your growth” (313). Ironically, the race that is framed as the primary antagonist throughout the text is the one that most closely resembles humanity. Like the Consu, the CDF also kills thousands in the name of colonization. Moreover, cultural/racial chauvinism drives both forms of colonization, though it manifests in slightly different ways: While humans believe that they must control the universe by wiping out other sentient species, the Consu believe in elevating all races to “Ungkat,” a form of perfection and nirvana, and thus effectively practice a form of cultural imperialism. Ultimately, this calls into question the very idea of colonization, emphasizing the ignorance of any group believing that they should kill in the name of progress.

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