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Still to be neat, still to be dressed

Fiction | Poem | Adult | Published in 1609

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Literary Devices

Form and Meter

The lyric form allows Jonson’s speaker to express his emotions in the first person and to explain what he “presumed” (Line 4) about a woman’s appearance and preparatory routine. In addition, the poem’s two sestets—a six-line stanza—allow Jonson to first define the problem before proposing a solution to this problem. The iambic tetrameter—poetic lines consisting of four iambic feet—and rhyming couplets work to create a songlike quality to support its lyric form. The stressing of the meter places emphasis on the tasks in the speaker’s repetitive listing of what still has to be accomplished. As a result, the speaker emphasizes the questionable tasks he also criticizes. The rhyming couplets help create a more playful and lighter tone in contrast with the speaker’s harsh criticism. In addition, the inconsistencies in the meter and rhyme—like the trochees (a metrical foot of a stressed syllable followed by an unstressed one and essentially the opposite of an iamb) in Lines 2 and 8—and the lack of rhyme in the first couplet, reinforce the message of the poem. By allowing “flaws” in his meter and rhyme, Jonson models the imperfect and natural beauty for which his speaker advocates.

Anaphora and Repetition

Jonson uses anaphora—replacement of a word—and repetition to underscore his thematic ideas. In stanza one, Jonson uses repetition throughout the lines. He repeats the phrase “still to be” four times in only six lines. This supports the phrases meaning that these tasks are continuous and ongoing. The effect is to highlight the tedious labor the lady is undertaking. The speaker ends the first stanza with a contrasting anaphora, “all is not” (Line 6), highlighting that the effect that everything is not as it appears is also ongoing. Jonson connects the problem to the ongoing solution by using an anaphora to begin stanza two before abandoning the technique all together. By limiting this repetition to the beginning of the stanza, Jonson suggests that this natural look will give the lady freedom in the same way his poem is now free from repetition.

Punctuation

The majority of Jonson’s lines have end stop punctuation: a comma or period at the end of each line. End stops work with the rhyming couplets to create a lyrical rhythm that helps to maintain a lighter tone despite the speaker’s critical message. In contrast, the sole use of enjambment—when a line of poetry flows into the next line without any end stop punctuation—disrupts this rhythm and allows the ideas in Line 10 to connect to Line 11. The indentation of Line 11 further reinforces this connection, visually linking the ideas connected by the use of enjambment. Here, the speaker reveals a more serious message hidden by his earlier lighter tone. The lady’s appearance is most explicitly connected to her sexuality here. The overly made-up look is a form of “adulteries” (Line 11) to the speaker’s heart.

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