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What She Saw

Mary Burton
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What She Saw

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2025

Plot Summary

In the small mountain town of Dawson, Virginia, a music festival held in 1994 ended in tragedy when four young women vanished. The event's promoter, Rafe Colton, was convicted as the Mountain Music Festival Killer, but the bodies were never found. Thirty-one years later, freelance true crime writer Sloane Grayson arrives in Dawson to investigate the case, locate the remains, and block the release of Colton, who is dying of cancer and seeking compassionate parole. Her investigation exposes layers of deception, implicates an unexpected accomplice, and culminates in a violent confrontation at the site where the women were buried.

The novel alternates between two timelines. In 1994, newly appointed Sheriff CJ Taggart, a retired marine military police officer, clashes with Mayor Mike Briggs over security for the Mountain Music Festival. Taggart identifies serious problems: inadequate exits, insufficient toilet facilities, and a promised security team that exists only on paper. Briggs, desperate for the economic boost the festival promises, dismisses every concern. When the event begins, the crowd swells to over 2,000, far beyond the expected 500. Rain turns the field to mud, fights erupt, and only three of the 20 promised security guards arrive, hours late. Taggart and his deputy Jed Paxton struggle to maintain order through a chaotic night during which four women disappear.

In the present-day timeline, Sloane rents the remote cabin of the late Sheriff Taggart. She is the daughter of Patty Reed, one of the four missing women known as the Festival Four. Raised by her grandmother Sara, who told Sloane only that her father was in prison for life, Sloane grew up emotionally detached. She acknowledges that she does not experience feelings the way most people do and channels her energy into investigative writing, using dangerous outlets such as reckless driving and breaking into buildings to relieve unprocessed tension.

Sloane's arrival in Dawson is not coincidental. Six weeks earlier, she met Grant McKenna, a retired Washington, DC, homicide detective, at a crime conference. Grant is the grandson of the woman on whose farmland the festival was held and now owns the property. He steered Sloane toward the case and has been visiting Colton in prison, trying to learn the location of the bodies before the parole hearing.

Sloane interviews people connected to the case. Buddy, the Depot Diner owner and Patty's secret lover, confirms Patty left the hamburger stand around midnight and never returned. Monica Carr, the aunt of victim Laurie Carr, a teenage aspiring singer known as the Blue Guitar Girl, describes years of grief. Joe Keller, the guitarist who drove Laurie to the festival and performed a duet with her onstage, recalls that she walked toward the woods after their set and vanished. Amy Wheeler, attacked in the woods that night, remembers hearing a scream and being grabbed by someone wearing a rough-edged ring, which Sloane connects to Colton's signet ring visible in festival photographs. Each interview reinforces her belief that Colton had an accomplice.

The 1994 timeline traces Taggart's investigation after the festival. Patty's mother, Sara Grayson, reports her missing. Taggart visits Patty's trailer and finds college rejection letters, a General Educational Development (GED) certificate, and a brochure for a Colorado resort job: evidence of a woman building a future, not running away. Reports follow for Laurie, then for Debra Jackson, a young woman who lived near Patty. Searching the woods behind the venue, Taggart discovers a torn, blood-stained T-shirt and a lone sneaker. After a press conference, Brian Fletcher reports his daughter Tristan, a talented dancer, as the fourth missing woman. Taggart obtains a search warrant for Colton's property and finds a shoebox containing trophies from each victim: Laurie's blue guitar strap, Patty's driver's license, Debra's heart necklace, and Tristan's onyx ring. Colton is arrested but taunts Taggart, insisting the absence of bodies means the case is hollow.

Sloane's investigation takes a critical turn at the home of Brian Fletcher. Among his wall of family photographs, she spots images from around 2010 showing Tristan's younger sister Lannie with a woman who closely resembles Tristan. Sloane breaks in at night and photographs the pictures; one is labeled "Lannie and Susan, 2010." She traces the woman to Susan Westbrook, owner of a dance studio in Northern Virginia. With Grant's help, Sloane tracks Susan to her suburban home and, after hours of waiting, persuades her to talk.

Susan confirms she is Tristan Fletcher. She describes meeting Colton backstage, where he offered her a water bottle she believes was drugged. She woke in a trailer where Colton was assaulting and strangling her. When she regained consciousness, she found three dead bodies around her and sensed a second person watching from inside the trailer, breathing rapidly. She never saw this person's face. Susan escaped through an unlocked door, walked for hours to a gas station, and called her father, who picked her up. They agreed to tell no one, and Brian filed a false missing person report to protect her.

Events accelerate. Brian Fletcher is found dead of an apparent self-inflicted gunshot wound, the photographs of Susan removed from his wall. Susan vanishes. Sloane visits Colton in prison and reveals that Tristan is alive and prepared to testify. Colton's composure breaks. Sloane tells him she believes he does not know where the bodies are because his accomplice never revealed the location; their mutual silence has functioned as mutually assured destruction. Colton warns that if he did have an accomplice, that person "will be freaking out."

Back in Dawson, someone hurls Molotov cocktails through the cabin windows while Sloane is alone inside. She escapes with her gun and backpack, twisting her ankle. The cabin burns to the ground. Sloane pieces together the accomplice's identity: Bailey Briggs Jones, the mayor's daughter turned real estate agent, whose practiced smiles never reach her eyes. Bailey had access to Colton through her father's festival planning, moved freely at the venue, and was connected to every victim. A tip from a local waitress provides the final geographic clue: an old barn on Tanner's Run Road sits near a collapsed mine shaft.

Sloane sends a provocative text and ensures word spreads that Tristan is alive. When Paxton comes to the diner to discuss the development, Sloane urges him to wear his bulletproof vest before heading out. At the barn, Bailey arrives first, followed by Sheriff Paxton. Bailey draws a revolver and shoots Paxton in the chest, then confesses to Sloane. She helped Colton lure the victims: Laurie went willingly, while Patty and Debra were drawn into the woods by a scream. Bailey watched the assaults from inside the trailer. She admits to three murders staged as suicides: her own father, who discovered a love letter from Colton; Taggart, whose renewed investigation threatened exposure; and Brian Fletcher, whose knowledge of Susan became a liability. Fletcher's golden retriever Cody, tied nearby, breaks free and distracts Bailey. Both women fire. Bailey's bullet grazes Sloane's arm; Sloane's shot shatters Bailey's shoulder. Paxton survives because he wore the bulletproof vest Sloane had suggested.

State police lower a camera into the mine shaft and recover three sets of remains. Susan, supported by her sister Lannie, turns herself in and agrees to testify in exchange for immunity. Bailey confesses fully in custody. Grant invites Sloane to stay at his farmhouse with him and Cody while she writes her article. Sloane agrees, recognizing that Grant offers a stability she has never known. Watching the remains emerge into the light, she reflects that she feels no grief, only a sense that she has done right by Patty, as Patty once did by her.

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