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The Appeal

Janice Hallett
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The Appeal

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2021

Plot Summary

Roderick Tanner, a senior partner at a law firm, sends a packet of recovered correspondence to two first-year law students, Femi Hassan and Charlotte Holroyd, asking them to determine the truth behind an unspecified case. The correspondence consists of emails, text messages, letters, and other documents exchanged among members of a community in Lockwood, England, centered on an amateur drama group called The Fairway Players. Tanner withholds all background, instructing the students to draw their own conclusions. Their text exchanges punctuate the material at intervals, offering analysis and evolving theories.

The documents open with a letter of recommendation for Samantha Greenwood, a nurse who spent nearly eight years volunteering with Médecins Sans Frontières (MSF), an international medical humanitarian organization, in Africa. Sam and her husband Kel Greenwood have recently settled in Lockwood, where Isabel Beck, a staff nurse on the Elderly Care ward at St. Ann's Hospital, befriends Sam and introduces the couple to The Fairway Players. Isabel emails Martin Hayward, the group's chairperson and co-owner of The Grange Country Club, urging him to recruit the newcomers. The group is preparing Arthur Miller's All My Sons, directed by Martin and assisted by his son James Hayward. Martin's wife, Helen Grace-Hayward, the group's leading actress, stars as Kate Keller. Sam and Kel are cast, and Isabel lobbies for and receives a small role when Martin's daughter Paige Reswick drops out.

The production is overshadowed by Martin's announcement that his two-year-old granddaughter Poppy has been diagnosed with Medulloblastoma, a rare and aggressive brain cancer. A pioneering American drug combination shows promise, but the treatment costs $350,000 and will not be available through the National Health Service (NHS), Britain's public healthcare system, for years. The family launches a crowdfunding campaign called A Cure for Poppy. Sarah-Jane MacDonald, a former fundraiser and close family friend, organizes a black-tie gala and a broader strategy. To secure a free bandleader, Sarah-Jane fabricates a claim that Poppy is losing her eyesight. The lie spreads through the community and boosts donations. Martin does not correct it and eventually states it as fact.

Sam, drawing on her medical background, quietly investigates the appeal. She contacts Dr. Tish Bhatoa, Poppy's consultant oncologist, but Tish refuses to discuss the case and threatens to reveal "the real reason" Sam left Africa. A hostile history emerges: While working in Bangui, capital of the Central African Republic, Sam accused Tish's brother Daniel Bhatoa of sexually abusing patients at his clinic. Tish defended Daniel, and Sam was forced to leave her post. Sam also creates a fake donor identity, Clive Handler, to test whether the drugs exist. When Handler requests details of the drug manufacturer, Tish provides only her own offshore bank account and refuses further information, deepening Sam's suspicions.

Martin, meanwhile, is under severe financial pressure from a gambling addiction, legal disputes, and construction debts at The Grange. He meets a woman calling herself Lydia Drake, who promises to multiply appeal funds through investment, and gives her $112,000. The money vanishes. When Colin Brasher, a tech entrepreneur and donor to the appeal, has his team trace the Drake emails to a computer at The Grange, Femi and Charlotte deduce that Martin himself fabricated the Lydia Drake identity to siphon appeal money into his own accounts.

Kel's troubled friend Arnold "Arnie" Ballancore, a former MSF volunteer who has a heroin addiction, arrives to stay with the couple, steals from their bank accounts, and causes a violent disturbance at a charity Yogathon. During the altercation, Arnie confronts Martin, calling him "Bhatoa's bitch" and accusing him of "protecting a rapist," revealing that Sam has shared her suspicions about Daniel Bhatoa. A letter from an aid worker later confirms that Daniel was killed by militants near the South Sudanese border and that Sam's original accusations were well-founded. Tish, independently learning of her brother's death, begins to accept the truth.

A parallel crisis unfolds: Kel has begun an affair with Claudia D'Souza, Sam's friend and a Human Resources manager at St. Ann's. Isabel, who overhears this revelation at the Yogathon, sleeps over at the Greenwoods' flat that night and uses Sam's laptop to email Claudia's husband, posing as Sam, to expose the affair. Claudia, believing Sam betrayed her, physically attacks Sam at the hospital.

At the dress rehearsal on the evening of July 4, Sam publicly accuses Martin and Helen of running a "financial conspiracy," claiming there are no experimental drugs, that Poppy receives standard chemotherapy, that Helen fabricated the story of a deceased son to generate sympathy, and that the appeal is a fraud. Helen breaks down. Martin cancels the rehearsal. The community sides unanimously with the Haywards. Afterward, Sam confronts Isabel in the car park, grabbing her arm and snarling in her ear.

Tanner interrupts the correspondence to reveal that Sam was murdered between 11 p.m. on July 4 and 4 a.m. on July 5 and that her body lay undiscovered for nearly 24 hours. Isabel confesses and pleads guilty, but Tanner believes she is innocent. He also reveals that Lauren Malden, a friend Isabel corresponds with throughout the documents, does not exist: Lauren is Isabel's invented alter ego, an imaginary companion she emails to process emotions and rehearse social interactions. Tanner tasks Femi and Charlotte with finding the real killer.

Through painstaking analysis, the students determine that "phials," a word Tish and Martin use in private exchanges, is code for "files." Tish has been blackmailing Martin with records proving that Helen, born Helen Macauley-Grace in Massachusetts, was tried for the death of her first child in 1978. The death was consistent with Fabricated or Induced Illness (FII), formerly known as Munchausen syndrome by proxy, a condition in which a caregiver deliberately makes a child sick to attract attention and sympathy. The trial collapsed on a technicality, and Helen fled to England under a new identity.

Femi concludes that Poppy was never ill. Under financial stress, Helen's condition resurfaced, and she began fabricating symptoms in Poppy. Martin, aware of his wife's history, enlisted Tish to stage fake chemotherapy sessions while using the fraudulent appeal to cover his debts. Tish discovered Helen's past and turned the arrangement into blackmail.

On the night of the murder, Sam receives a voicemail from Andrea Morley, the genealogist she hired to investigate Helen's background, confirming her suspicions. Sam calls James, who drives to her flat, terrified his family's secret will be exposed. James kills Sam on the balcony, locks the doors, and returns to the hospital, where his wife Olivia Hayward has just given birth to twins and has been posting on social media as James, providing his alibi. Isabel, who has traveled to Sam's flat by bus to return an African fabric bag after the hostile car-park confrontation, encounters James leaving. He enlists her silence, and she later confesses to protect the family she idolizes.

Martin is convicted of charity fraud and sentenced to six years. The judge tells him: "You cynically lied to those closest to you. You preyed on their kindness and pulled on their heartstrings to gain as much money as possible for yourself" (412). Isabel's conviction is overturned on appeal, and a man aged 37, implied to be James, is arrested on suspicion of murder. In a final email, Isabel writes to Femi, thanking him, expressing hope that James will not go to prison, and outlining plans for a fresh start, a new drama group, and a career as a legal secretary. Her tone is characteristically effusive and oblivious to boundaries, her fundamental need for connection unchanged.

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