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Womb City

Tlotlo Tsamaase
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Womb City

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2024

Plot Summary

In a futuristic Gaborone, Botswana, consciousness transfer technology allows citizens to body-hop, moving their minds into new bodies across multiple lifespans. Bodies are graded by condition and supplied through the Body Hope Facility, while a surveillance state monitors citizens fitted with AI microchips implanted in those inhabiting bodies with criminal histories. Every Sunday, police towers release chemicals that, catalyzed by sunlight, trace hidden corpses. An annual forensic evaluation conducted by the AI Criminal Behavior Evaluator (CBE) predicts future criminal behavior, and those flagged face severe penalties.

Nelah Bogosi-Ntsu, a 28-year-old architect in her third lifespan, lives under constant scrutiny because her body's second host committed crimes. Her microchip records everything she sees and transmits it to monitoring towers. Each morning, her husband, Elifasi Bogosi-Ntsu, an assistant commissioner of police, reviews her footage. Nelah's body also has a bionic prosthetic arm whose origins her family refuses to explain. She and Elifasi have lost four pregnancies, earning her the tabloid nickname "the Black Womb."

Nelah's family life is fractured. Her brother Limbani, who has never body-hopped, resents her presence in his dead sister's body. Her parents withhold her inheritance and refuse to discuss the body's history. Meanwhile, Nelah has carried on a two-year emotional affair with Janith Koshal, whose father, Aarav Koshal, runs a powerful conglomerate that faced dropped sexual harassment allegations.

Desperate for a child, Nelah and Elifasi sign over their savings to grow a daughter in a Wombcubator, an artificial womb at the Matsieng Fertility Fund near the sacred Matsieng heritage site, where, according to Batswana folklore, a colossal god climbed out of waterholes in the earth, birthing the first tribes. A kill switch will terminate the pregnancy if they fall behind on payments.

Nelah barely survives her annual CBE evaluation, a multi-day simulation designed to extract confessions and predict future crime. She is placed on probation after picking up an unattended baby in a hospital ward, triggering her microchip to electrocute her. Jan deepens their relationship by giving Nelah a device that intercepts her microchip's recording signal and feeds manipulated footage to the monitoring towers. He reveals that his father illegally procured him two new bodies after childhood sexual abuse led to a suicide attempt and a failed CBE evaluation. He also discloses that powerful men retain memories across lifespans while women are deliberately given amnesia during transfers, and that Matsieng's bloodlike waters possess properties tied to the Murder Trials, secretive city-run tests that place microchipped citizens in staged criminal scenarios.

On the night Nelah's firm wins a prestigious architecture grant, she and Jan celebrate with cocaine, pills, and alcohol. Deeply intoxicated, Nelah drives through back roads after midnight. The car strikes a young woman, leaving her critically injured but alive. Jan argues they will face permanent incarceration if caught, and that public opinion will destroy Nelah as a microchipped mother caught cheating. Terrified of losing her daughter, Nelah suffocates the dying woman while Jan shovels dirt over the body, then Jan flays the skin from the victim's face to destroy evidence.

The next morning, Nelah passes her AI assessment, aided by Jan's device. They identify the victim as Moremi Gadifele, a 23-year-old horror film student whose backpack contains stolen microchips, a quantum computer, and cryptic journal entries. The burial site sits on a construction zone scheduled for blasting, and Sunday's chemical release will lead investigators to the grave.

Moremi's ghost appears, disfigured and furious. Elifasi cannot see the apparition, though Jan later can. Moremi burns Nelah with her touch, moves through walls, and defies physics. She announces she will kill every member of Nelah's family before killing Nelah herself. A ghostly microchip falls from Moremi's incorporeal body, an impossibility since Moremi should never have been microchipped. As Moremi's attacks escalate, Nelah's father, Loeto Bogosi, sees the ghost and understands his own hidden guilt. He shoots himself to give Nelah another chance. Moremi then announces Nelah's mother is next and gives Nelah two hours to investigate who illegally implanted the microchip.

Nelah races to the airport to intercept her mother's flight. The plane lands, but Moremi boards the aircraft and emerges holding Mama's severed head. She offers Nelah a deal: To end everything, Nelah must kill her unborn daughter the same way she killed Moremi. Nelah shoots herself in the head, but the bullet is expelled, her skull heals, and Moremi tells her there is no escape through suicide.

Military forces capture Nelah and Jan and transport them to the Matsieng facility, where prosecutor Serati Zwebathu reveals the full truth. The Murder Trials are city-sanctioned purification rituals in which microchipped citizens are unknowingly placed in criminal scenarios as purity tests. Nelah was the fourth person tested; the first three reported their hit-and-runs and passed. Nelah failed by killing and burying the victim. Matsieng's waterwombs, deep crevices filled with bloodlike water, sustain the system by storing the blood and memories of citizens. If Nelah wins, she loses her identity and is exiled in a new body. If Moremi wins, she is resurrected into Nelah's body. Aarav arrives, reveals he sits on the Murder Trials board, and burns the microchips Nelah needs to fulfill Moremi's conditions.

Nelah and Jan excavate Moremi's body and follow coordinates tattooed on her thigh to a secret residence containing a cinema room. Moremi arrives dragging Nelah's unconscious, injured brother Limbani. Through a simulation triggered by pills, Nelah and Jan experience Moremi's microchip footage. The recordings reveal that Aarav's firm used microchips supplied by Elifasi to control employees' bodies, mine their cultural DNA, and prostitute them during memory blackouts. Serati, Aarav, and Elifasi conspired together: Serati can manipulate the Murder Trials' victim and murderer selections, women's memories are deliberately erased to silence them, and Moremi is Nelah's biological daughter from a previous lifespan. The three conspirators engineered the killing by forcing Moremi's microchipped body into the path of Nelah's car.

Moremi, shattered by the revelation, acknowledges Nelah as her mother. Limbani confesses the family's remaining secrets: Their father previously participated in the Murder Trials after accidentally killing a boy while hunting, and the family's wealth came from hush money. Loeto killed his own firstborn daughter to satisfy the ghost's demands and save his remaining family. Nelah and Moremi form an alliance: Nelah will sacrifice herself to Matsieng's waterwombs to gain the power to overthrow the Murder Trials, protect her unborn daughter, and avenge Moremi.

Elifasi arrives armed, revealing he has drunk Matsieng's blood and gained the power to manipulate Moremi's kill order, positioning himself last behind their unborn daughter so that the baby must die before Moremi can reach him. Moremi attacks Elifasi, devastating his body, then delivers him and Nelah to the Matsieng facility.

With minutes remaining before the deadline, Nelah throws herself into the waterwombs, submitting her body and soul to the god. She absorbs centuries of victims' memories, traumas, and rage, then emerges transformed into a totemic being, part human and part sacred animal, commanding the elements. Declaring herself Matsieng incarnate, she destroys the Murder Trials Committee, kills Aarav and Elifasi, and extends her purging reach through the air to eliminate all undetected offenders across the city.

Every citizen dies and is reborn. Pure spirits rise and pour into new sin-free bodies emerging from Matsieng's waterwombs, each person choosing their own form. Jan, Mama, and Moremi each receive new bodies. Moremi appears carrying Nelah's living baby daughter. Nelah stands with her two daughters, her mother, and Jan on the edge of a remade world, declaring that women will be powerful, invincible, and untouchable.

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