The Art of Fiction
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David LodgeThe Art of Fiction
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The Persuasive Use of Written Style
In The Art of Fiction, author David Lodge makes the case that style is not merely decorative but is instead the primary medium through which a novel enacts its worldview. He defines fiction as an “essentially rhetorical art” (x), where an author’s choices in diction, syntax, and voice work to persuade the reader to adopt a particular ethical or emotional stance toward the characters and their world. Whether through the calculated authenticity of slang, the seductive allure of ornate prose, or the polyphonic clash of multiple voices, style functions as an author’s fundamental ethical and ideological signature, shaping meaning at the deepest level.
In this context, Lodge presents the opening moments of a novel as crucial rhetorical acts, junctures where authors forge their primary contract with the reader, establishing the terms for tone, style, and narrative closure. From the initial sentence that serves as a “threshold” into the fictional world to the final pages that manage resolution, beginnings and endings are strategic signals that calibrate reader expectation and determine the ultimate shape and impact of the narrative experience. Lodge demonstrates that how a story starts dictates how it will be read and that how it concludes determines how it will be remembered.
Lodge explores how a colloquial style can serve to persuade the reader of the authenticity of the narrative. Analyzing J. D. Salinger’s The Catcher in the Rye, he identifies Holden Caulfield’s narrative voice—a form of teenage “skaz”—as the key to the novel’s persuasive power. Holden’s informal, repetitive, and slang-filled language is, Lodge argues, the “guarantee of his spontaneity and authenticity.” (19) This seemingly “impoverished” style is strategically deployed against the phony and pretentious speech of the adult world. The stylistic contrast between Holden’s raw narration and the stilted dialogue of others persuades the reader to align with his rebellious perspective.
At the opposite end of the spectrum, Lodge demonstrates how “fancy prose” can be used to manipulate the reader’s moral compass, creating a seductive yet disturbing experience. His central example is Vladimir Nabokov’s Lolita, whose narrator, Humbert Humbert, acknowledges, “You can always count on a murderer for a fancy prose style” (95). Lodge points to the lyrical, alliterative, and poetic quality of Humbert’s language, which draws the reader into a relationship with a pedophile and murderer. In the absence of the poetic prose, Humbert’s world would be too bleak for the reader to enter. Lodge also shows that even literary techniques that establish the artifice of the novel are rhetorical tools meant to immerse the reader in the novel’s world. For instance, the character who begins Slaughterhouse-Five with the words “I would hate to tell you what this lousy little book cost me in money and anxiety and time” immediately tempts the reader to go on to see whether the book is indeed worth the money, anxiety, and time (209).
Embracing Ambiguity While Reading
Lodge frames ambiguity as a prerequisite to a reader’s participation in a text. Asserting that fiction deliberately plays on uncertainty, Lodge suggests that the reader take advantage of the ambiguity to become an active co-creator of meaning. His analysis shows how carefully constructed gaps and contradictions compel readers to become interpreters, piecing together clues and assessing character to arrive at a truth that the text resists stating outright. This process, he suggests, fosters a deeper, more intellectually and emotionally rewarding experience than a straightforward narrative ever could.
The use of unresolved mystery is a key technique for sustaining meaning beyond simple plot mechanics. Lodge contrasts the conventional detective story, which offers the reassurance of a solved puzzle, with Modern literary fiction’s tendency to leave mysteries deliberately open. His primary example is Rudyard Kipling’s “Mrs. Bathurst,” a story Lodge describes as full of “elaborate and undecidable mystifications” (31). The central questions—why the sailor Vickery deserted and what became of him—are never definitively answered. By withholding a clear solution, Kipling pushes the reader beyond a narrow focus on causality and toward a broader contemplation of the story’s tragic undertones. The story becomes less about an event to be solved and more about grappling with what Lodge calls “the greatest mystery of all is the human heart” (34), a theme that resonates precisely because it lacks a neat conclusion.
Lodge extends this analysis to the unreliable narrator, a figure whose biases and blind spots require the reader’s active correction. He examines Stevens, the narrator of Kazuo Ishiguro’s The Remains of the Day, whose formal, self-effacing prose conceals a lifetime of emotional repression and moral evasion. Lodge notes that Stevens’s account is “riddled with devious self-justification” (155), forcing the reader to discern the vast gap between the butler’s perception of his service and the grim reality of his master’s fascist sympathies and his own personal failures. The reader must become a psychological detective, assembling a more accurate and damning version of events than the narrator himself is willing or able to provide.
The most radical form of ambiguity that Lodge explores is aporia, or deep doubt, which structures the very texture of a narrative. Using Samuel Beckett’s The Unnamable, Lodge illustrates how a narrator’s complete uncertainty—“Where now? Who now? When now?” (219)—can become the text’s driving principle. The narrator constantly questions his own existence and utterance, stating, “I seem to speak, it is not I, about me, it is not about me” (219). This relentless self-cancellation dismantles the reader’s expectation of a stable story or character. Instead, the reading experience becomes an engagement with the philosophical problem of knowing and being. By foregrounding these various forms of ambiguity, Lodge argues that fiction’s greatest power often lies not in the answers it provides but in the questions it provokes.
The Importance of Defamiliarization in Writing
One of the subtler themes running through The Art of Fiction is the question of what makes a narrative memorable or special. For Lodge, the answer lies in a text’s claim to originality, though he doesn’t define originality as invention. In fact, Lodge argues that invention for its own sake is a trick to be admired from a distance, rather than a book to be read, as in the case of Alphabetical Africa, in which the first chapter only contains words beginning with “A,” and so on. Lodge dryly describes the book of this ilk as “probably more fun to read about than read” (108). Invention in a work of narrative fiction only makes sense when it persuades the reader to look at the familiar world with new eyes. This effect is achieved, Lodge stresses, through the technique of defamiliarization.
“Defamiliarization, in short, is another word for ‘originality’” (55), Lodge states, presenting it as a technique key to literary originality. He further defines the purpose defamiliarization: to renew a reader’s perception. Lodge draws on the Russian Formalist Victor Shklovsky’s concept of “making strange” to explain the essential purpose of this artistic move. For instance, in Charlotte Brontë’s Villette, the narrator describes a grand painting in plain, literal terms, emphasizing the absurdities of its composition, such as a semi-nude figure reclining among yards of drapery, her healthy pallor at odds with her languishing manner. It’s only after the narrator has described the painting that it’s revealed as a classical work titled Cleopatra, forcing the reader to view all such famous compositions with new eyes.
By stripping away conventional interpretations, defamiliarization provides powerful critical leverage. In the Villette example, it becomes a tool of feminist insight, questioning the representation of women in historical art and asking questions such as why the odalisque must appear passive and languishing. This technique of making the familiar strange extends to environmental representation. Lodge discusses Charles Dickens’s deployment of defamiliarization in the opening chapter of Bleak House, which begins,
London. Michaelmas term lately over, and the Lord Chancellor sitting in Lincoln's Inn Hall. Implacable November weather. As much mud in the streets as if the waters had but newly retired from the face of the earth, and it would not be wonderful to meet a Megalosaurus, forty feet long or so, waddling like an elephantine lizard up Holborn Hill. Smoke lowering down from chimney-pots, making a soft black drizzle, with flakes of soot in it as big as full-grown snowflakes--gone into mourning, one might imagine, for the death of the sun (84).
Here, the allusion to the biblical Flood and the gargantuan Megalosaurus immediately defamiliarize the London landscape before the narrative introduces familiar images such as smoke and soot. The juxtaposition of the unfamiliar and the familiar turns the famous London fog into an apocalyptic symbol of institutional decay, the key theme of the novel. The defamiliarization forces the reader to see the ills of Victorian London society, which, if not fixed, will fall into chaos.
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