The Right Move

Liz Tomforde

59 pages 1-hour read

Liz Tomforde

The Right Move

Fiction | Novel | Adult | Published in 2023

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Series Context: The Windy City Series and Shared Universe

Liz Tomforde’s The Right Move is the second book in the Windy City series, a collection of interconnected standalone romance novels centered on professional athletes in Chicago. This structure, popular in contemporary romance, creates a shared universe where characters from one story appear in subsequent books, enriching the world and allowing readers to follow the lives of previous protagonists. The Right Move is directly linked to the first book, Mile High, which tells the story of Ryan Shay’s twin sister, Stevie, and her relationship with Evan Zanders, a player for Chicago’s professional hockey team. Stevie gradually uncovers the caring heart behind the bad boy façade Zanders cultivates to cope with his past trauma. In The Right Move, Stevie and Zanders are a central support system for the main characters. The plot is set in motion when Stevie convinces Ryan to let her friend Indy move into his apartment. Later, Zanders’ own experience with media scrutiny allows him to advise Indy on the pressures of dating a high-profile athlete. The narrative crossover deepens the story’s emotional stakes, as established relationships and past events directly influence the new protagonists’ journey.


As the Windy City series continues, some minor characters from this story become the focus of their own romances. Caught Up (2023) focuses on Kai Rhodes, a professional baseball player who appears with his infant son, Max, in The Right Move as a friend and neighbor of Indy and Ryan’s. Kai’s love story with Miller Montgomery, an acclaimed pastry chef who becomes Max’s nanny while grappling with a creative block, follows the slow-burn and “opposites attract” tropes. Play Along (2024) stays in the world of professional baseball and tells a loves story between an ambitious female trainer named Kennedy Kay and Isaiah Rhodes, the team’s fun-loving, handsome shortstop. They wake up married in Las Vegas after an impulsive night, and Tomforde uses their romance to explores mental health and gender dynamics in the workplace. The male lead of Rewind It Back (2025) is Rio DeLuca, a close friend of Indy’s who facilitates The Right Move’s happy ending by helping her reconcile with Ryan. The series’s fifth installment is a second-chance romance as the professional hockey player rekindles his relationship with Hallie Hart, an interior designer who was his childhood friend and first love. By weaving characters and plotlines together, Tomforde builds a cohesive fictional Chicago where relationships extend beyond a single book, creating a more immersive experience for the reader.

Genre Context: Conventions of the Fake Dating Trope in Contemporary Romance

The Right Move employs the “fake dating” trope, a popular convention in contemporary romance where two characters pretend to be in a relationship for mutual benefit. This narrative device creates forced proximity and performative intimacy, compelling the characters to confront their vulnerabilities and develop genuine feelings. In the novel, basketball captain Ryan needs a girlfriend to appease his team’s general manager, who believes he lacks a healthy work-life balance. Meanwhile, Indy Ivers needs a date for an upcoming wedding, where she will have to face her ex-boyfriend. Their arrangement is a practical solution, as Ryan proposes, “Be my date to the fall banquet, and I’ll be your date to the wedding” (70). The pretense requires Ryan, who is reclusive and untrusting, and Indy, who is healing from heartbreak, to navigate public appearances and private moments that blur the lines between performance and reality. Their initial agreement to “coexist in the same apartment until you can find yourself a different situation” (17) evolves as the pressures of their fake relationship force them to rely on each other, ultimately leading to real intimacy and love.


This trope is a mainstay of the romance genre, with reader communities like Goodreads cataloging thousands of titles under the “fake relationship” tag. Like Indy, Lina Martín, the protagonist of The Spanish Love Deception (2021) by Elena Armas, enters a fake dating arrangement because she needs a plus one for a wedding. A coworker named Aaron Blackford becomes her pretend boyfriend and joins her at her sister’s nuptials in Spain, and the two gradually fall in love in a story that shares The Right Move’s focus on family and healing from past betrayals. Another popular novel that employs the fake dating convention is Ali Hazelwood’s The Love Hypothesis (2021), which tells a love story between two scientific researchers at Stanford. Olive Smith wants a pretend boyfriend to convince her friends she’s moved on from her ex, and Adam Carlsen enters the arrangement to convince the university that he’s committed to staying there. Their act blossoms into a genuine relationship as they support one another through personal and professional challenges, which is similar to Tomforde’s investigation of the tension between private and public identities in The Right Move.


The fake dating trope draws romance readers because it provides a structured framework for exploring the development of authentic emotional connection.

Social Context: The Pressure and Scrutiny of Modern Professional Athletes

Ryan’s reclusive and paranoid nature reflects the real-world pressures faced by modern professional athletes, whose lives are subject to intense and constant scrutiny. Several factors, including “discrimination and racism, increasing professionalization of sports at younger ages, a lack of mental health literacy and resources, the effect of technology and the 24/7 world, and the COVID-19 pandemic,” are coming together “to create the perfect storm” of a mental health crisis among athletes (Reardon, Claudia “The Mental Health Crisis in Sports: The Perfect Storm of Contemporary Factors.” Journal of Athletic Training, 16 Nov. 2023). In an era of 24/7 sports media and pervasive social media, athletes’ public and private actions are often dissected by fans, journalists, and critics, making personal privacy a rare luxury. This hyper-visibility can lead to profound distrust and a guarded approach to personal relationships, which is central to Ryan’s character.


Increasingly, athletes and their supporters are addressing the crushing pressure they face. Acclaimed tennis player Naomi Osaka has spoken publicly about the significant mental health toll of the media, choosing to withdraw from press conferences to protect her well-being. This social context allows readers to understand Ryan’s extreme caution and initial resistance to Indy as a realistic response to the pressures of modern athletic stardom. Another prominent athlete who has publicly spoken about mental health is Alysa Liu, a figure skater with ADHD who earned a gold medal at the 2026 Olympics after taking a two-year break from the sport because she felt as though she didn’t have any say in her own life: “Liu came back [...] with one caveat: everything—music, costumes, diet, training—would be on her terms” (Sausa, Christie. “Alysa Liu Is the ADHD Role Model We Desperately Needed.” ADHD Science and Strategies, 4 Mar. 2026). Liu’s triumphant recovery from burnout underscores the possibilities that can be achieved when athletes’ health and agency are protected. Stakeholders can create positive change by increasing mental health literacy, providing trauma-informed mental health care, educating athletes on the ways social media impacts their physical and mental health, and by delivering “the consistent message that their worth does not depend on their success in sport” (Reardon, Claudia “The Mental Health Crisis in Sports: The Perfect Storm of Contemporary Factors.” Journal of Athletic Training, 16 Nov. 2023). To combat the mental health crisis in the world of sport, everyone from fans to executives needs to recognize that athletes are human and deserve care and dignity.

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