Shift

Hugh Howey
63 pages2-hour read
Fiction
Novel
Adult
Published in 2013

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Hugh Howey on Shift

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Why he wrote it

A backstory he already knew he had to tell

The architecture of Shift was not an afterthought assembled once Wool became a bestseller. Howey had committed to the full backstory of the silos while writing Wool‘s second installment, before he had any commercial reason to do so. By the time readers were asking what came before, he had already worked it out.

Hugh Howey

I wrote the first one as a standalone, and there was going to be no more—anyone who has read the work can kind of see how that was the case—but starting with the second one, I plotted out what now is even the works I’m working on now; I had to come up with the backstory and the eventual fate of these characters.

lightspeedmagazine.com, “Interview: Hugh Howey”

Once the backstory existed, the question was whether to capitalize on Wool‘s momentum by continuing forward from its ending or to do something structurally riskier. He chose the risk, knowing it would mean abandoning the characters readers had just spent a book with.

Hugh Howey

The next three books are going to be a bit of a risk. I’m going to leave the cast we’ve come to know for a while and go back to the beginning and reveal how the world got into the mess it’s in.

wired.com, “Hugh Howey Interview Part 2: A Spoiler-Filled Discussion of The Wool Omnibus”

The departure from Wool‘s timeline was also, in part, a refusal to do the obvious thing. A sequel that opens where the previous book closed carried a specific creative failure he wanted to avoid, and he named it directly in an author chat.

Hugh Howey

With Shift, I decided to take a departure, not just like pick up from the last page... it feels like you didn’t finish your book, you just are kind of recycling your content. [paraphrased from audio]

LiteraryHypeWoman, “Hugh Howey on the ‘Silo’ changes and details he loves most [Author Chats]”

Going backward in time was not only structurally logical. It was a way of honoring the reader’s intelligence rather than trading on their attachment to familiar faces.

How he wrote it

Knowing the ending before the middle existed

A multi-century timeline spanning the construction of the silos to the world Wool depicts required Howey to write destination-first. He had spoken about this method in the context of Wool, but it was Shift, with its jumps across generations, that made the constraint non-negotiable.

Hugh Howey

I have an idea of where a story is going to end before I start writing. I’ll even write a very rough outline of the last scene or the last chapter, so I know where everyone’s going to end up and where the story is going to finish.

writersdigest.com, “How Hugh Howey Turned His Self-Published Story “Wool” Into a Success (& a Book Deal)”

The extinction mechanism at the trilogy’s center, the reason the silos were deemed necessary in the first place, was chosen because most catastrophe scenarios fail a basic test of plausibility. In an O’Reilly interview, Howey explained the specific logic that pointed him toward a technological cause rather than a biological one.

Hugh Howey

I think the only way will be technological, because it won’t rely on transmission the way a virus does. [paraphrased from audio]

O’Reilly, “WOOL’s Hugh Howey: His writing process and why he’s optimistic about technology”

A pathogen requires time to spread. A technological agent does not. That simultaneity, the possibility of reaching everyone before any defense could organize, was what the story required, and learning that a friend’s non-fiction research pointed toward the same mechanism disturbed him rather than reassured him.


Before Howey wrote a word of the Silo series, his years as a yacht captain sailing into places like Cuba had already given him the image that the wall screen, the false projection of the outside world that keeps silo inhabitants from wanting to leave, would eventually embody. He traced the idea directly on his website, naming the two experiences that produced it.

Hugh Howey

The biggest influence from my life was sailing into Cuba in the late 90s and volunteering in a Bronx soup kitchen over my spring breaks. Both experiences taught me that the news of the world is very different from the actual view of the world. Don’t trust screens to tell you how things are. Go out and see the world for yourself.

hughhowey.com, “Questions and Answers”

The personal thread

Grain silos and the gap between image and place

Howey grew up on a farm in Monroe, North Carolina, where grain silos were part of the landscape he played in as a child. He has been careful not to overclaim the connection, but he has also never dismissed it.

Hugh Howey

We grew up with these big grain silos we used to climb around inside and on top of. I don’t know if having those there influenced me or not, but they’re definitely part of my childhood.

lightspeedmagazine.com, “Interview: Hugh Howey”

The wall screen, Shift‘s most politically charged invention, the false image of a poisoned world projected to keep people from wanting to leave, did not come from the science fiction tradition. It came from two specific episodes in his own life, one on a sailboat in the late 1990s and one in a Bronx soup kitchen during university breaks, where what he found bore no resemblance to what screens had led him to expect. That gap between mediated image and lived reality is what the Silo trilogy is built on, and Shift is the book that explains the machinery behind it.

Hugh Howey

The biggest influence from my life was sailing into Cuba in the late 90s and volunteering in a Bronx soup kitchen over my spring breaks. Both experiences taught me that the news of the world is very different from the actual view of the world. Don’t trust screens to tell you how things are. Go out and see the world for yourself.

hughhowey.com, “Questions and Answers”

On what the book is wrestling with

Rousseau versus Hobbes, decided uncomfortably

The Silo trilogy positions two incompatible beliefs about human nature against each other, and Shift, as the book that reveals the Founders’ intentions and reasoning, is where readers are forced to reckon with which side they fall on. Howey named the philosophical poles plainly in a K.E. Lanning interview.

Hugh Howey

The main point of this series is that we’re all victims of our beliefs in human nature. Roughly half of us see humanity as deeply good and worthy of being completely free. The other half sees humanity as deeply flawed and requiring restraint.

kelanning.com, “Hugh Howey”

Howey wanted readers to find themselves sympathizing with people on both sides of the catastrophe that created the silos, and he knew that meant some would land on the side of the architects. He said so at a Wired interview, before Shift was written, anticipating the discomfort the prequel would create.

Hugh Howey

What I hope will happen is that readers will find themselves choosing sides. Maybe even choosing poorly!

wired.com, “Hugh Howey Interview Part 2: A Spoiler-Filled Discussion of The Wool Omnibus”

By the time Howey addressed the trilogy’s resolution at a Featey AMA, he had settled on his own answer to the question Shift poses: whether what the Founders did to humanity was justified. His answer placed him somewhere he found genuinely uncomfortable, and he said so without hedging.

Hugh Howey

She understood that she was born a victim of a twisted ideology. What she didn’t understand is that humanity would’ve gone extinct otherwise. The question is: was it worth it? My opinion is yes. Which puts me on the side of the Founders. It’s very uncomfortable. But that’s what the books were aiming for. [paraphrased from audio]

Featey, “Silo Author Hugh Howey Most Important AMA Answers Deep Dive!”

That discomfort is the point. Shift is not designed to make the Founders’ logic comfortable. It is designed to make it legible, which is a harder thing to sit with.

What he wants us to sit with

Choosing sides, possibly wrongly

Howey’s ambition for the trilogy was never to deliver a verdict on whether control or freedom produces better outcomes. He wanted to build a world where both positions had genuine evidence behind them, and where readers would have to do the work of choosing. He named the philosophical tradition each side belongs to in a K.E. Lanning interview, placing Juliette, the protagonist of Wool, on the Rousseau side and the silo architects squarely on the other.

Hugh Howey

The main point of this series is that we’re all victims of our beliefs in human nature. Roughly half of us see humanity as deeply good and worthy of being completely free. The other half sees humanity as deeply flawed and requiring restraint.

kelanning.com, “Hugh Howey”

Shift is the book where readers encounter the Founders as people with reasons rather than as villains with power. Howey signaled that intention early, before the prequel was written, describing what he hoped the backward-looking structure would produce in readers.

Hugh Howey

What I hope will happen is that readers will find themselves choosing sides. Maybe even choosing poorly!

wired.com, “Hugh Howey Interview Part 2: A Spoiler-Filled Discussion of The Wool Omnibus”

The wall screen, which Shift explains was built on a deliberate lie about the outside world’s condition, carries Howey’s most personal argument: that mediated images of reality are systematically unreliable, and that the instinct to trust them over direct experience is the vulnerability the Founders exploited. He drew the lesson in the plainest terms on his own website, addressed to readers asking about the series.

Hugh Howey

The biggest influence from my life was sailing into Cuba in the late 90s and volunteering in a Bronx soup kitchen over my spring breaks. Both experiences taught me that the news of the world is very different from the actual view of the world. Don’t trust screens to tell you how things are. Go out and see the world for yourself.

hughhowey.com, “Questions and Answers”