Pay Attention, Carter Jones

Gary D. Schmidt

52 pages 1-hour read

Gary D. Schmidt

Pay Attention, Carter Jones

Fiction | Novel | Middle Grade | Published in 2019

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Chapters 6-10Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Chapter 6 Summary: “The Umpire”

When Carter and his sisters get home, their mother confirms that the family Jeep is beyond repair and, due to their financial troubles, will not be replaced. The Butler announces that he will now drive the children in the vintage Bentley, nicknamed the “Eggplant,” until Carter gets his license. He immediately gives 12-year-old Carter his first driving lesson. Carter successfully drives around the block, stalling only once, while his mother and sisters watch from the front stoop. When he returns, they applaud. The Butler then reveals that Carter’s grandfather shipped the car over as a gift, and it will legally belong to Carter when he turns 18. That evening, the Butler mentions that he is renting rooms from Mr. Krebs, the father of an eighth-grade boy named Carson Krebs. Carter and his mother briefly consider inviting the Butler to stay in his father’s empty study, but the moment passes.

Chapter 7 Summary: “A True Wicket”

On Saturday morning, Carter discovers that the Butler has disposed of his favorite cereal, “Ace Robotroid Sugar Stars.” Instead of letting Carter eat while watching cartoons, the Butler serves him a “civilized” breakfast of a soft-boiled egg and toast, insisting he eat it alone in the formal dining room. Carter struggles to open the egg, making a mess that the family dog, Ned, eats from the floor. Ned then throws up. Later, while walking the dog, Carter runs into his friend Billy Colt, who complains that Ned always poops by his driveway. Carter asks if Billy saw him driving the Bentley the previous day and feels disappointed that Billy did not. Carter reflects that this disappointment is less than his disappointment over not having received an email reply from his father.

Chapter 8 Summary: “A Rabbit”

Billy Colt joins the Jones children for the apple tarts the Butler serves for breakfast. Afterward, the Butler has Carter start the Bentley, then emerges from the house dressed in all-white cricket attire. He gives Carter and Billy white sweaters and hats, telling Carter to change into a white, collared shirt. Carter owns only one white, collared shirt, which he last wore to his younger brother’s funeral. The Butler announces he is a “cricketer” and that they will be playing the sport; Billy will be the “batsman” (who bats) and Carter will be the “fielder” (who fields the ball). Ignoring the boys’ embarrassment, the Butler marches them toward the school fields in their conspicuous cricket whites.

Chapter 9 Summary: “The Crease”

Walking to the school, Carter flashes back to a trip he took to Australia with his father after his younger brother, Currier, died. Carter believes that his mother forced his father on the trip to spend time with him. He recalls the quiet tension between them while hiking in the Blue Mountains and how he clutched Currier’s green marble for comfort. In the present, the Butler leads the boys onto the middle school’s pristine and normally off-limits football field. Ignoring Carter’s protests, he hammers three wooden stakes, called “stumps,” into the grass and places two small pieces of wood, or “bails,” across their tops to form a cricket “wicket.” The spectacle stops all activity on the nearby baseball fields and track, drawing the attention of the eighth-grade cross-country team and their coach, Coach Krosoczka, who begin walking toward them.

Chapter 10 Summary: “The Wicketkeeper”

As Coach Krosoczka approaches, the Butler calmly explains the rules of cricket to a terrified Billy Colt. When the coach confronts him, the Butler defuses the situation by inviting him to be the “wicketkeeper,” the player who stands behind the wicket. He then proceeds to organize the entire eighth-grade cross-country team into specific fielding positions, recognizing one of the players as Carson Krebs. Carson helps Carter strap on protective pads and tells him that cricket is a “serious” game and he must “pay attention.” The words startle Carter, triggering sensory memories from his Australia trip. The Butler finalizes the impromptu arrangement, with Coach Krosoczka as wicketkeeper and Carter as one of the first batsmen. As Carter prepares to bat, the sounds of the Australian wilderness echo in his mind.

Chapters 6-10 Analysis

Carter’s first driving lesson in the Bentley is a rite of passage initiated by the Butler to fill the void left by both Carter’s absent father. As Carter successfully pilots the car, his mother watches with a “weird smile, like I had just grown up or something” (44). This moment establishes the Butler’s role as an enforcer of maturity, stepping in to provide practical instruction and agency where Carter has none. The huge, vintage luxury car—a symbol of British aristocratic tastes that looks comically out of place in Carter’s middle-class American suburb—is a gift from Carter’s grandfather, legally his at 18, cementing it as a tangible link to his lineage and a promise of future responsibility. The chapter title, “The Umpire,” frames the Butler as the “ultimate arbiter of fair play” (40), a figure who makes decisive calls. His decision to teach Carter to drive is an umpire-like judgment that imposes a new set of rules and responsibilities, officiating Carter’s transition into a more adult role within the beleaguered family structure.


The Butler’s efforts to impose order on the Jones household are further illustrated when he throws away Carter’s “Uncivilized Sugar Stars” (49) and serves him a “civilized” soft-boiled egg. The farcical scene of Carter smashing the egg, which the dog eats and then vomits, uses humor to emphasize the distance between the Butler’s expectations and the Jones family’s daily reality. This blend of the absurd and the agonizing is a hallmark of Schmidt’s style, using situational comedy to make underlying pain approachable. Carter’s frustration and isolation—eating alone in the formal dining room where the family never eats—points toward more significant instances of isolation: Carter’s driving triumph is tinged with disappointment that his friend Billy Colt failed to see it, but even this disappointment is overshadowed by his deeper sadness as his heartfelt email to his father goes unanswered. The title “A True Wicket” refers to a predictable, flat playing surface in cricket. The Butler’s breakfast routine is an attempt to create a “true wicket” from the family’s messy life, but in this instance it only creates more mess, demonstrating that their circumstances remain a “sticky wicket,” where such efforts at control can easily go awry.


As Carter walks toward the school fields in his conspicuous cricket whites, the narrative suddenly shifts into a flashback, revealing the source of his internal turmoil and demonstrating how memory intrudes upon his current experience. The tone and diction shift during this flashback—the humor that characterizes the novel as a whole falls away, replaced by lyricism and sensory imagery—the “smell of wet earth and water” (59), “the screeching of white birds that flocked high up in the tall trees and stared down at us. Every so often a hunting call from something big—like a dinosaur, maybe” (59-60). These descriptions illustrate the heightened importance of this memory in Carter’s mind and create an atmosphere of isolation and latent danger that mirrors the unspoken tension with his father. During this time of intense grief, Carter “held the green marble tightly” (61), using the symbol of his lost brother as a talisman against the emotional distance between him and his father. This flashback contextualizes Carter’s current anxiety, showing that his struggle is not just with present circumstances but with the complex, unresolved trauma of Navigating Grief and Abandonment. The past is not merely a memory but a landscape he continues to inhabit emotionally.


The introduction of cricket is a public and often embarrassing performance of the Butler’s curriculum for becoming a gentleman. Forced into an all-white uniform—including a shirt Carter associates with funerals, linking the bizarre new ritual to his history of loss—Carter is marched onto the middle school’s sacrosanct football field. By commandeering a public space and audaciously recruiting the entire eighth-grade cross-country team, the Butler begins the work of Redefining Family and Community. He moves Carter beyond the confines of his chaotic home and into a wider, more structured social world governed by a clear set of rules. The motif of cricket thus becomes the primary vehicle for teaching discipline and sportsmanship—values that provide an external framework for Carter’s internal chaos. By defusing the coach’s anger and organizing coach and students into a pick-up game of cricket, the Butler models a form of confident, benevolent authority. The chapter titles reinforce Carter’s novice status within this new order: “A Rabbit” refers to a fearful, unskilled batsman, which describes Carter and Billy perfectly, while “The Crease” names the spot where a player must stand and defend his position, foreshadowing the public test of character that awaits.


The command from eighth-grader Carson Krebs to “pay attention” (71) is a thematic lynchpin, directly connecting the discipline of cricket to Carter’s unprocessed trauma. The phrase triggers an involuntary return of the sensory details from his Australia trip, as he hears the “high screeches again” and the “sound of waterfalls” (73) from the Blue Mountains. This moment confirms that the focus required for cricket is the same mental fortitude needed to confront painful memories, articulating the theme of The Power of Paying Attention as a psychological practice. The juxtaposition of the Australian wilderness with the suburban football field reveals the deep stakes of the Butler’s lessons; he is not just teaching a game but providing a structure for managing trauma. In this context, the final chapter title, “The Wicketkeeper,” gains symbolic weight. A wicketkeeper is positioned to catch what the batsman misses. As Carter stands at the crease, overwhelmed by memory and facing his first test, the Butler has assembled an entire impromptu team to act as a collective safety net, ready to support him.

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